And idea is forming,
but still left in abstract.
Colors all around are straying;
forming something new.
Slowly, a shape emerges from abyss.
A rose...? Yes! A rose.
A single blush-pink rose.
The other swirls have yet to decide,
just what they wish to make.
And so they dance, and they sway;
twirling around and very nearly
pulling the rose back into abyss.
Shapes can almost be made out,
from this tornado of colors;
almost but not quite.
A rose has formed from the abyss,
bringing all it's beauty.
Author notes
-Freckle Central- (Idk... )
Alrighty then... not my best. Not my worst. Just standard. Hope you liked it. It was a pic promt fyi. As I am no longer silver, I can't post it. And I don't have a link. Sorry.
A contest entry
- Awesome Pic Prompt!!!!:):):):) by The Green Elf.
523 points, ended April 29, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment honestly please. But don't be rude. CONSTRUCTIVE CRISTISM is welcome. But don't bash me; I work hard.
Comments
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Great depiction of that alluring flower that grows in my back yard!
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I loved it. It was really origanal and totally awesome!
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Thanks.
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