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Children

Children are our future
The beginning of a new age
When young, they are to cherish
When older, it's a new page
To a new generation of adults.

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  • The FaeQueen
    April 23, 2008
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    It is so sweet. i get what you mean. i get the same feeling everytime i look at my precious SON!


  • Celinda Luna
    April 21, 2008

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    Short and sweet

    Very nice way of summing up the message of how children are our future. Liked the flow of the 2nd and 4th lines best.


  • Miss Chievous
    April 21, 2008
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    Im not sure how i should describe this but it is ok..
    Good Job


  • Quill Bill
    April 21, 2008
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    lovely

    sort and sweet but says so much.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    So true

    And as we the child are given the reigns and have children of our own make the teaching be of love and joy so we all can see the gifts and each have the right to turn the page good write here kep up the good work

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