With moments in time, I've come to cherish
and dreams to soar the highest skies;
once again, I blossom and flourish-
a sunken soul to soon arise.
I'll write your name in puffs of white;
drifting clouds to catch my fall.
As I lay my eyes on the glorious sight
with visions to hold me enthralled.
I've thought, do you have the right to touch me there?
Well...my heart and soul, to you, I bare.
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A contest entry
- Quicky - 10 x 10 x 100min - Prompt given so you can get a head start! by intanglio2ring.
800 points, ended April 20, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think.
Comments
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So romantic, so loving; so beautiful
sigh...
Love is an awesome thing and you wrote of it dead on beautifully!
Congrats on the HM
Love you much!
Sandy -
Wonderful - really baring all for your love to catch - I do hope you get caught!
Thanks for your entry
Tang
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Excellent
What a romantic and touching right. Touching in all the right place. Best of luck in the contest.
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well done Sis for the beauty of your soul illuminates within the write and holds with you dearly and close. check line 9 - the first "to" may need to be changed to "the". many blessings always xxxx
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