try as hard as i can,
just to be with you,
but do you care at all,
with these things that you do.
do you like to watch me struggle,
do you like to watch me fall,
are you happy that for you,
i would give it all?
i try my hardest,
just to find a place in your world,
but you took all my thoughts,
and made them knotted and twirled.
something keeps getting in the way,
of me being with you,
i'm believeing you don't care,
about all the things i've had to do.
our ties are finally breaking,
and for once i can see,
that no matter how hard i try,
you'll never have a place for me.
Author notes
i absolutly love this song and hoped i did it justice.
A contest entry
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300 points, ended April 23, 2008, 7 entries
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Extremely well written! I think you did this song amazing justice!! Thank you so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest!
Keep on writing!
Leslie
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thankyou!
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This is really well writen I love the title
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The Diary of Jane by Breaking Benjamin
If I had to
I would put myself right beside you
So let me ask
Would you like that?
Would you like that?
And I don't mind
If you say this love is the last time
So now I'll ask
Do you like that?
Do you like that?
NO!!
Something's getting in the way
Something's just about to break
I will try to find my place in the diary of Jane
So tell me how it should be
Try to find out what makes you tick
As I lie down
Sore and sick
Do you like that?
Do you like that?
There's a fine line between love and hate
And I don't mind
Just let me say that I like that
I like that
Something's getting in the way
Something's just about to break
I will try to find my place in the diary of Jane
As I burn another page
As I look the other way
I still try to find my place in the diary of Jane
So tell me how it should be
Desperate, I will crawl
Waiting for so long
No love, there is no love
Die for anyone
What have I become
Something's getting in the way
Something's just about to break
I will try to find my place in the diary of Jane
As I burn another page
As I look the other way
I still try to find my place
In the diary of Jane
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