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Ballad of Curiousity and Fear

A victim of hypocrisy
The fear of curiousity
Keeping me in animosity
Please do not ask the question

It's no fearful monstrosity
Only my own ferocity
That gives me to atrocity
Please do not ask the question

It's my, not their, pomposity
With exactly zero religiosity
An avoidance of generosity
Please do not ask the question

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  • Love of a Bullet
    May 25, 2008
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    0 - good in 2.6 seconds.

    Great, ahem, velocity.

  • LookIntoTheAir
    April 24, 2008
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    This sounds like it should be a song. =) I love it.


  • scottles
    April 22, 2008

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    i like the rythm and the way you used repetition...i really like the poem, it has a mysterious air of being deep...a machete to the soul...opens a door into life, and makes you look at things in a different perspective