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~ Farewell ~ { Gold }

My time, my lover,

We have danced the last fading steps,

Sun is setting within my horizons,

Air thins to the impending seasons, turning,

Take comfort,

Sufferance, for now I feel no pain,

Receding shadows of life,

Whispers ,

Can you hear them calling,

calling my name.


 

 

 



 

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Summer Minuet
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  • mistiman
    June 14
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    Superb words of new found strength formed from emotional despair ... brilliant Jules

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 22

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    Oh WOW.. stunning! You penned something amazing for that pic! Absolutely deserved that Gold!
    Awesome hun. Gotta be one of my favourites of yours!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 22

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    I can clearly see why this has a golden cup at the bottom darling!! The wording is wonderful. Love you


  • Unconscious-Energy gold member
    April 21
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    Gold is right

    Well done my lady. Well done. mwuh....


  • penman gold member
    April 21
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • aboomer silver member
    April 21

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    Had to check out the picture - yup, this goes great with it! Lovely, but sad, wording. Full of great emotion.
    best wishes in your contest


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 21

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    Excellent imager in this composition---Very well versed with good flow!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest


  • Abe 1
    April 21

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    i just seen de pic !
    and de summin up
    well u ave said everything ere, very good, sad, lost lover, loss of life
    ope u fair well in dis contest
    abe

  • midnite wolf silver member
    April 21

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    wow this is great, so deep and moving, but yet so sad, someone who has given in to the fact that death is calling their name and their time will son come, great write x x

  • Nighttime angel
    April 21

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    love this one Mum, a lot.. glad that you sent this.. I needed this more than you could have known.. it seems the love that I thought I had wasn't real.. sorry for rambling. beautiful poem yet sad..

    good luck in the contest

    love you Mum

    kat


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 21

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    That is deep and very very beautiful writing indeed. Such depth to this is just wonderful. Very very sad indeed. I took this as death coming her way, calling her name. Good luck in the contest.

    Wonderful Julie.
    x


  • unsigned gold member
    April 21

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    Wow Sis this is soooo deeeep I love it, you have excelled and I applaud you.

    Love

    Simon

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