Dancing (part 1)
I’m dancing with you,
In that secret spot slowly,
You're looking up, I stare down,
This song fills us with blue wind,
And sweeps us over all things.
Dancing (part 2)
We fly over all,
To situate ourselves here,
Where no one comes in,
And no one calls us or knocks,
Where we can make love, guilt free.
Dancing (part 3)
Yet we would return,
To see those we left behind,
We’d laugh and call bluffs,
Of those who dare try and say,
That we could not make it, back.
Author notes
A poem about running away.
A contest entry
- Heal my broken heart!!!!!! by hopelesspoet.
950 points, ended July 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like this it sings to me and it even made me smile good luck to you in the contest
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yay!
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very nice poem here you did a great excellent job thanks for sharing your thoughts and good luck tou you in the contest
petal desires
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I lovvvve this! Love love lovvvve this!
It's obvious to say that I connect with it, but even aside from that, it's just beautiful. It's amazing how you can put such things into words.
Wow. This is going into our box, patsy. hehe
i love you.
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Very soft... and very... vivid...
I really like the soft imagery to this one..
It's beautiful
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