Gently she calls
voice of angels
sweetly singing
As the birds of heavens
Fly around her
calls each by name…
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A contest entry
- 20 word Pic Quickie - 10*20*30 {2} by Unsigned.
300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Amazingagorium! Almost Anything Goes. by wonderbandalice.
375 points, ended July 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice. Pleasant. The picture really adds to it, it flows well, nice word choice, it's generally well written.
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I think that you have written a very nice poem off of the picture that you have included in your entry.
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OOH! I think this is the most lovely poem I've ever read. Wonderful imagery.
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Very nice sound to her gentle call. Nice expansion on image.
Congratulations on silver.
Marlene -
Love it really good take...
voice of angels
sweetly singing
As the birds of heavens
Fly around her
fantastic
Simon -
awww wow
tis is superb
wonderful write and good luck in the contest
take care
stephanie =)
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