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impressions

dim soft light on wings flying
with graceful brush strokes glide
lavender skies are brought to life
on canvas of inspired vision
that sips the nectar of your delight

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Beautifully done, with words of love for someone you care for...I am so wonderfully happy to see it with a well deserved trophy...
    Best,
    mystic


  • Tam
    May 7, 2008

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    beautifully penned!

    I love the vibe of this write!!
    very well done sir!
    Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me! I’m delighted my three favorite things inspired your Muse...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • sheltered
    April 23, 2008
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    Love this... Very tight,
    graceful, airy and light.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 22, 2008
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    Very sensual and soft...beautifully touching in your wonderful style...a truely wonderful write with excellent metpahor for such a lovely lady and all her favorite things...
    Best to you!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    Wow!! You silver tongued devil you! This is really beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.

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