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Exhaustion

Missing image
Elation soon fading to a fatiguE
Xray vision and a perfect XeroX
Hopeless feeling, emotions higH
Absolute comfort, in this arenA
Underestimation by me and yoU
Special pricing drives most saleS
Territory dispute on the dockeT
Initial goals now forces the alibI
Ongoing traumatic affects us toO
Nocturnal life's worth turning iN

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    A strong write with deep thoughts and emotion put into it.
    Liked this a lot