I never knew
That you could breath
When your heart no longer beats..
I didn't know
That life would look the same
When all you feel is pain...
I gave what I could But it really never seemed enough
I thought that maybe I would be able to really feel something
But hey what do I know right..
I'm trapt in a world of pain and I have nothing
Really to show for this life that I have lived...
I am swimming in my emotions,
The tears that fall are like little daggers in my heart..
I have a ring on my finger yes that is true
But I never would have put it on if I had known you
Sooner..
I know that you may read this and feel really bad..
But I don't want you to feel that way at all..
I just want you to know that I am still here for you
Whenever you need me call...
I will always do what I can, though it may hurt , but I wont
stop helping you until I'm 6 feet under...
Don't ever stop writing from the soul,
For your words are like magic, they are worth gold..
You have been through Hell, but look at you now!
Your a wounded Angel, but on his way back to Heaven..
I hope that you find that love that you've always been looking for
I hope you know that it's you I'll always adore..
I don't mean to be childish but just give me some time,
I'll do what I can to make everything all right!!
I loved you more then a friend but I guess I knew deep down that
It would not work-out in the end..
I'll be here when you call, I am your friend after all..
Author notes
Angelflower....
This was really a little letter to a dear friend of mine.. I know that it may sound like a rant in a way but my emotions right now are just out of wack so bare with me..
A contest entry
- tears, fears, and everything inbetween by nobodys-girl.
700 points, ended May 4, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winners In My Past Contests Come Together by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 15, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awww wow, this is just bam packed of emotions, great write and good luck *hugs*
take care, and i hope things get better
stephanie
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Oh my gosh!!!!!!! I am all welled up!! Oh sis I can so relate to this... reminds me of my soul mate I lost.. yet who remains a friend and someone I will always love and be there for.
This is heartbreaking in its honesty and open love still shining through the tears!
You deserve to have all that you wish for and I hope you find the one that will be by your side to love and cherish you...
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aw sweetie such a loving write, i felt that it was coming straight from your heart. i saw a lot of me in what you've written specially in the line
I will always do what I can, though it may hurt , but I wont
stop helping you until I'm 6 feet under...
thats just like me!
well done sweetie.
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A tender write longing for someone you know you can't have. Wishing you had met them earlier in life, frought with thoughts of what might have been but having to live in the reality. May friendship satisfy your love in its bounty...alby
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Ahh. yes and I shall be satisfied with friendship, because that is what reality has to offer.. Thank you for your kind comment..
Jetleena
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this is so beautiful. i loved it. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it.. good luck in judging.
Jetleena
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Wow, this is beautiful poetry. Cherish it.
You have some talent Girl.
'I hope that you find that love that you've always been looking for
I hope you know that it's you I'll always adore..
I don't mean to be childish but just give me some time,
I'll do what I can to make everything all right!!'
That is so touching, no matter how childish you may think you sound, you're acting oh so mature. I know what it feels like, to love a friend, and know it will never work out, right from the start. I know how it feels.
The title is good, there really are no imperfections.
Comment on my new poems? <3 x
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Beautiful
Wonderful write my friend.
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I LOVE this. I sorta understand what your saying... because I have a problem that matches this in away... Truthfully this is a wonderful poem and a beautiful letter. Koodles
Blessed be
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Thank you very much for your kind comment.. I am sorry that you are having, almost, the same problem.. Hope it works out better for you..again thanks for the comment..
Jetleena
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This is the heart touching poetry..as it is the honest voice and the music of the heart which is the most rare and soulful work ..I love this piece...
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THank you so very much.. I really wasn't trying to make it a poem. I was just really thinking out loud, I guess you could say.. again thank you so much.
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