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Element of Surprise

Fear shadows me closely,

like a panther ready to pounce.

Searching for an opportunity,

to attack and kill it's prey.

 

I let down my guard unaware,

and it has the element of surprise.

Fear holds me down tightly,

and this time, I can't escape.

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  • Nakatrea
    April 21, 2008

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    this is a little dark for you no? who knows.... maybe you actually have dark secrets. muahahahahahaha! no J/K good . short and sweet - good that way. ok i have to go see if we have math homework


    • shopaholica
      April 21, 2008
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      LOL today was soo fun!!
      I got stung by a wasp
      HAHAHA so happy HAHAHA
      NOT
      but my leg is feeling better