I walked away
when you needed me the most.
I said I would be there,
but I guess I was wrong.
I nerver got ther chance to say sorry,
before you were gone.
I never meant for this to be,
I made a mistake and you paid.
Sorry for what I did,
and the pain I caused your family.
Now I say good bye to my friends and family,
I'm coming to join you in the sky.
Author notes
Sorry if it sounds kind of depressing, it originally wasn't going to sound suicidal.
A contest entry
- Long-overdue Apologies by think of me x.
1100 points, ended May 7, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked it until the last part.
I don't know, it felt a little extreme
And in my opinion ruined the sincereness of it
Because people who kill themselves over guilt
Always feel a bit weak and selfish, to me
I could be wrong about that, but... who knows
Anyways, thanks for entering and good luck :]
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It was very good and I loved it!!!!! I also sencesed that it was your usaual theme. Thats not a bad thing you write it very good though it is like your signiture!
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