The night is dark, where can I turn for light.
Each path is strewn with boulders I can't see
The moon I love is hidden far from sight
I need a loving hand to steady me
For those who've faith in gods and other dreams
It's safe to stride ahead without a view
I cannot trust such vision in these steams
Where will I tread until I've sight of you
When all is safe and troubles cast aside
I know that I will see the way again
But I must swim against prevailing tide
And you must find a way to conquer pain
With love the darkest night will pass away
So I can see the path as clear as day
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Oh, what a lovely sonnet! Really a beautiful form, and you have done it justice.
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Thank-you
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This is truly a wonderful sonnet, perfectly penned in decasyllable with wonderful rhyme and meter if read with an English accent. To my ear, "again" rhymes with "men". No one here says "again" like it rhymes with "pain". This is really a great sonnet barring your wierd accent.
Love,
Amera♥
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We get the choice to rhyme it either way. There are some advantages to speaking English
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Wonderful Sonnet
The words flow with a beautiful rhythm and the concept is vividly beautiful about love & need....I enjoyed this read....excellent...
novy
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wonderfully penned..this is where I am in it. Thanks for sharing you with us...especially me.
You have been a ray of light.
Love ya
Passions
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Jeff, this is an excellent sonnet, true to the spirit of the form. Well done.
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It is good to know that there is light even through the darkest times.Hooray, the lighter nights are on their way, Ros
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