She shopped at all the brightest, rightest places of her day.
With only the classiest(?) of men she lay.
But when she opened her mouth - she had nothing to say.
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired - Under 50 Words by Exodus.
525 points, ended May 10, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I don't think the rhyme did anything for this, if anything it made the rhythm seem a little jagged. But other than that it was an interesting take on the prompt.
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Thank you, lol
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lol. this is a great write, a unique take on the prompt
great job and good luck in the contest
take care
stephanie
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Thanks so much
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A wonderful poem showing that what things look like are not what they are. People appear top notch on the outside, yet truly on the inside they are empty. Truly inspiring write.
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Thanks, Z, hahaha you tapped in.lol
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A poem that unfurls the deception having to do with outward show of flamboyance without any inner composition of decorum.The wording is superbly done in conformity with the contest requirement I suppose.
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Hi VV, how are you? thanks for this reviewlol
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ah some perhaps in the poshest of realms are there just for show, to look good and smile in society's circles a good poem.
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You thinkfor sure there's a strong possibility that that is the case. hahaha
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