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Gladys

Nosey neighbor
looks at you
wonders what you're up to

Late night party
rounds of fun
dancing til the dawn comes

She'll shake her head
and make a list
hoping you will
cease and desist

The sirens scream
throughout the night
as uniformed officers
break up the fight

Parents called
the parties done
the sun is up
and so's the fun

A contest entry

Remember Gladys Kravitz...or am I showing my age?

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  • Jbthemilker
    April 27, 2008

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    Bronze trophy winner

    Thank you for entering my contest. Congratulations on winning the bronze trophy. I have started a new contest with the points I was given. I hope to see you enter that contest as well.


  • MagicLady silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    I remember having those kind of parties when I was younger....and not understanding why neighbors complained. Now that I am an adult...I understand
    Good luck in the contest.
    Cheryl

  • pongo
    April 20, 2008

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    Don't you hate those nosey neighbors? Although it is that same nosey neighbors that call the cops so I don't have to. You wrote an interesting take on the prompt.