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Young Love


You'll always be forever young
When life is but another day
I'll remember how we begun
Two kids on the beach at play


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  • blondone
    June 5, 2008

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    Hood-Wink

    Oh Oh the imagery I can feel the sand in my toes this is too sweet the rhyme and flow is perfect I am guessing this is your background I do not know how to make them but this is beautiful ...

    P.S. You've been Hood-Winked by the Poetic Bandits

  • piccola silver member
    April 22, 2008

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    aww this is so sweet. I love the dots along the border. Nice job and thank you for entering. The write is very sweet and romantic.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 21, 2008
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    LOVE IT!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 21, 2008

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    Absolutely gorgeous hun, the background and poem just hold together so sweetly

    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Desire gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    Oh My!!

    Another Gorgeous Creation and Love how the picture is so crystal clear~
    Beautiful weaving of Your name in there also
    Very Creative~~
    Precious

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 20, 2008
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    Ah..such a sacred poetry I read..well done...


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    WOW!!! I am SO impressed. This is incredible. Awesome soft, muted colors, and great graphics. Well done! Good luck.

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