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Your Careless Mistake

Mummy why did you talk about me in such a way
Why are you killing me why cant i stay
All i want to do is love you
Why cant you do that for me too

I am the reuslt of your careless mistake
why cant you keep me for gods sake
Mummy i dont think you realise that i am alive
all i want you to do is make me survive

But its too late now mummy
iv been left to die in your tummy
I knew it was coming but not this quick
I have been murdered and its Far too sick

i bet my daddy would not agree
He would have loved everythink about me
But because of you i am not here
how can you think about this without a tear




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  • Kari gold member
    May 8, 2008
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    Welcome To AP

    Hello L34h,

    This is so sad
    One thing tho...noone is a mistake!
    We're all here for a reason

    On this line right here you have a typo I think -
    "I am the reuslt of your careless mistake"
    reuslt should be result

    Just remember you're never a mistake. Never.


    Kari,
    Site Greeter


  • Shakespeare
    April 20, 2008

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    I like it. It doesn't have the required amount of lines, but since I haven't really received the desired amount of entries I'll let it slide. Nice write!