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Hollow

Standing lonely behind the bars;
my greed has petrified me,
doomed to entertain
while my tears excavate me,
invisible pain.

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Picture Inspired; picture is from By the UPPERHANDART on Flickr

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  • daviscth silver member
    June 19, 2008

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    This is a wonderful response to the picture. I love the imagery in your words, they really brought the picture to life.


  • Kathryn Bowden
    May 16, 2008
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    wow! I would love to see the picture that prompted this one!

    • Nevel
      May 17, 2008
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      Hi Kathryn, just click on the contest I enter with this poem, and you will see the pic

  • Unsigned gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    ow...different...

    Best wishes

    Simon

  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 20, 2008
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    awww you did wonderfully
    great write, and ncie take on the prompt
    good luck
    stephanie =)
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