Within in your hands
I melt..
your tongue
caressing my curves,
tempted by sweetness..
Don't you just love
ice cream!!
Author notes
pic credit:By the U P P E R H A N D A R T on Flickr
A contest entry
- Sunday Pic Quickie - Clarity of vision - Luna-Midnight (more points added) by Unsigned.
470 points, ended April 21, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem penned, ohh ice cream, i wish i ahd some right now, chocolate flavour of course, or rum and raison, that's nice, i wish i had some beer more though.
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Wonderful...thanks so much for the smile...
Best wishes
Simon -
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Thanks for the Silver sir. Now I'm going to celebrate with some ice cream!!
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LOL, I must say this is not what I expected, but am very glad I found this! I think I could go for some ice cream too
Great job on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Yep I'm kinda in the mood for ice cream now too lol
and love
Linda -
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But i am way too tired to go get any
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Way too tired to get any?
you mean... LOL never mind I'll get out of the gutter now lol
Bless you
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That depends on just what we are talking about and if it is in my dreams or not hehe...
love ya
Nyetta
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Don't forget the ice cream
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LOL, strawberry wine, dancing in the stars.... what more could I ask for
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Maybe a little whipped cream? LOL Can you tell I'm in a mood tonight
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Got my mouth watering you did.
Nice take on the prompt. Best wishes in life and the contest
Peace in light and love
Noah
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I have way too much fun with some of these prompts lol Thanks for your comment
Linda
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hahahaha =)
ahuh
great write
and good luck =)
thanks for entering
stephanie
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