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all hope is gone,
leaving a hollow spot
my fury is drawn
leaving enemies to rot.

my fists drip blood
as my eyes drip sorrow
the darkness comes in a flood
to keep me from tomorrow

i bask in the light
it feels so cold
draining my might
telling me my soul is sold

hatred burns my chest
agony fills my mind
the hellfires become my crest
garish visions turn me blind

death keeps knocking at my door
i keep dropping him to the floor.

Author notes

seiji, i chose option 4. something dark

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please this story gives me trouble at almost every turn, any suggestions would be very welcome

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  • XXVampireeyesXX silver member
    April 20
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    wonderful... nice dark piece.. loved it.. thanks for participating!