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Coming around again

Missing image
photos perched stately upon the mantle
reminding her of goodbye kisses
and returned hugs
she longed to embrace

her country home
smells of freshly baked love
bread rising and cup cakes
for precious hands
that lift her spirits higher than the moon

and she waits
by the evergreen hillside
where the fence
divides her hushed existence
and the rest of the world

peering through the looking glass
at a sight she breathes in
softly
among the daffodils
that grow wildly at her feet

the blue sedan
moving closer to her heart
inching forward
letting her thoughts tumble
back to when she held her baby boy
within her soul

and as she cradles visions of emotion
seeing his divine image
cupped gently inside the backseat
tiny fingers, little toes
born
to link another life
around her bracelet of completion...

Author notes

photo courtesy of jbthemilker

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  • Jbthemilker
    April 27, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest.

    Thank you for entering my contest. I get great joy from reading the poems the prompts inspire. You have penned a poem that brings forth many pictures to mind.


  • MagicLady silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    I think this poem is stunning, but I don't see the connection to the photo. Maybe I am just missing it. Good luck in the ocntest.
    Cheryl


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    born
    to link another life
    around her bracelet of completion...

    Amamzing words and imagery


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    nice immagery and wonderful emotions brought this picture a life..thanks for sharing this amazing piece..well done