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Acceptance



  Snipped
  in all those
serene morose belief
  she lies
    her thoughts
    shattering
in painted canvas
  like smiling infant


...abyss....

  ~accepted~








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  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    lol.
    this is just wonderful
    i really like it
    and i know this really doesnt have much to do with anything
    but i really like that teal color lol
    but wonderful word choice and write
    good luck
    stephanie =)


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 20, 2008
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    So creative and detailed with profound metaphor and imagery... x


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 20, 2008
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    Hmm...the gapping abys awaits..*peers in and turns back*

    nice write

    Simon