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Break-In



breath marks
on your window shop eyes
and pennies in my pocket
tracing letters
in the dust
  on your back
      in my mind
your taste
is a hunger I am full of
a sentence
my lips are denied
and I'm done waiting








 

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ahhma bad man

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  • Lotus-Mama
    April 29, 2008

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    Whew... is it getting warm in here?

    Beautiful, sensual, write. The ending is a not so kind jab to the gut! Outstanding, my friend!!!


  • Dygurl
    April 21, 2008
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    disapointment, Longing, a great write. You have a unique style. I like it.