subliminal intentions
or questionable motives
behind seared limbs
impossible in change
certainly, the snow of your lie
will crystallize your lungs
with a liars breath
reverie in each relapse
silken flesh doesn't scar
marred with a flick of the wrist
and erased within a week
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Oh, wonderful. I love your vocabulary and the eloquence of the wording and the flow. Amazing write.
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Great write!
I really felt your pain and also your strength in this piece. Thanks for sharing, Angellightwolf
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wow this is one of the most intresting that I have read you did very well with this short piece I hope to read more artsy pieces
love the rev papa
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"marred with a flick of the wrist
and erased within a week"
Powerful!!
John
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this scares me
as if judgement is coming
i need to get my house in order...lol
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it isn't supposed to be scary! ):
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