Your splendid poems in spellbinding spaces
touch my soul as fingers of silver
to a stream of sparks goes getting lighter
towards the pearly height, fine burning cloud.
Your writings gave evidence on so little hearts
a varnish of wish a coat of softness.
ancient air sings me their pain
while I discover your mysterious aura.
How much souls get lost so my angel?
in divine poem passes in our poor hearts
toning, libertine, intoxicating, strong liqueur
dispels ichor, liberates from some sludge.
Your marine words are water wings in shipwreck
into bluish oceans to drown our tears
a foghorn to lay down weapon
Happy birthday poetess, lets go around on a page.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Happy Birthday 'creationsfromheart'
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday Contest for creationsfromheart by penman.
1850 points, ended April 25, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Gosh this could just about make anyone smile, even though for a specific person etc.. Words I felt coming from the heart but gret ways to describe them...You showed respect love and even inspiration form the person in this...Excellent *hug* *rose* *hug* Cindy
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This is beautiful ~ thank you so much for sharing ~ best of luck hun ~ I loved this
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aw thank you so much! and so much imagery my favorite as you know this is just beautiful thank you so very much!
awwwww I feel so special you are just another added sparkle and gimmer of art to my life thank you so much!!!!!
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