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Dear XXXXXX

Dear XXXXXX god has chosen you for me
Dear XXXXXX why can't you look at me?
Dear XXXXXX acknowledge I'm here
My attraction for you XXXXXX will prove fatal
My feelings for you are taboo because of that girl
The one I used to call mine
If only you had been my first attraction
You would not look at me with eyes full of scorn
I did not mean to break her heart
But pain is a side affect of love
I promise you immunity in my arms
A sanctuary in my soul
A shelter in my heart
A euphoria in my presence
Just accept my lips on your own
Joined like a Christain at prayer
We would slip off to happily ever after

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  • Popping Balloons
    April 24, 2008
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    that is really good

    who is the XXXXXX i wish to know this lmao


  • true.romance
    April 20, 2008

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    The XXXXXXX thing that you have going on really kills this poem for me. If you want anonymity there are many better ways t do it.