I have my own personal angel.
I call this angel my little man.
He follow me wherever i go and
when I'm gone and he can't come along
he just cries and cries again
until i let him in.
He's alway trying to get me to chase him
sometimes even to race him.
When my angel falls and starts to cry
i pick him up and say it'll be alright.
I watch my angel very close.
Even when he tries to climb the tree.
You see may angel is only three.
It is hard for me to say,
but he is growing everyday.
You see he will become a man,
He'll become someone else's angel,
but I'll still remember when it began.
This angel is my nephew
who is no longer two.
He is now three no
longer bouncing on my knee.
I love this angel so much.
To him i want to clutch,
but i know i must let this angle go
so that he may have time to grow.
I'll alway know that from when it began
this angel will always be my little man.
A contest entry
- mom and baby by Mrs. C..
1490 points, ended August 21, 2008, 13 entries
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This poem is a little happier and that is because it is about my nephew
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wow this was such a beautiful and touching piece of poetry. you did a gorgeous job of expressing your feelings towards your nephew.
brilliant job.
Allthe best
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awwww that is so cute and cuddly children are a blessing Good peice.
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cool!!!
man this poem is awesome. at times i like to read happy poems.
bye,star
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ya hes a cutie!!! wow what an angel huh...glad u wrote this one verry great..
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aw how very cute. I love thinking of things diffrently then other people do. I know I have to have a reflection on leaders, and I wrote all about little kids leading me. The one thing I'd say for your future rwriting is don't force the rhyme. Poems don't have to rhyme and though this had nice sentiments, the ryhme was way forced. keep up the work though darlin! With love and giggles, the white rabbit
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awwwwh how sweet!!
I love this poem its wonderful you must love him very much!
great job girl keep it up!
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