Circulation mixes another round
of reality as day breaks
heartache spilling the past
in calm etiquette, lives will fake
shrouding emotions in silent background
scene with stormy forecast.
Fast channels
surf circumstance
searching to conjure the blame.
Reclaim dignity grabbing the rebound
when low self-esteem is at stake,
shake self-pity to cast
wit as arrogance overtakes
demeanor with sarcastic turnaround
in neighborhood broadcast.
Blast panel
that deals finance
resenting what we became.
Game's tactics will inspire inquisition,
ambitions cling to crippled condition.
Author notes
Individualtean form
A contest entry
- Invitation only by individuality.
1000 points, ended April 21, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you dig syllables?
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
A really deserving gold winner...
Dropped by to enjoy your fine indi and think you are right on the money with this one, fine Poet Sir. Love the way you built this... the rhyming and all. 
-
Congratulation On Gold
This makes me stop and look at the different trials in my life that have always turned into the form of all these tactics indeed.
Amazingly done
Favorite lines:
Game's tactics will inspire inquisition,
ambitions cling to crippled condition.
Very Bold
Blessings&Love
~CherylAnn~
-
Syllables are fun hahahaaha I love them. Congrats on the Gold and on writing a fine poem.lol
-
I swear you could write this form in your freaking sleep I am so jealous of that fact. Always love reading these when you write them.
Congrats on your trophy
I am really diggin' that new profile pic
Becky
-
This definitely deserved the gold trophy. An amazing poem; you have mastered this form and suits your style very well. Well done with this.
-
Very nice. It has a great flow. I had one heck of a time trying to get the form right. Congratulations.
~ Joyce
-
I love the opening, but I like the ending even more. Nice rhyme sequence too, and the third line, second stanza really tells true to people in general.
-
well all is good here with the form, i see nothing out of place. a good piece with your usual flair, this form suits your way of working.
-
-
we interupt this program....excellent! echoing static in color and black and white...love the first line...starts with a strong stroke and doesn't falter. you're so good at this form...at anything you do, really.lol love the last two lines...excellent, as always!
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
