Beauty dawned upon his face
Within his heart, my love, encased
Melting in his warm embrace
...ah, but he were not there
A contest entry
- Lines of Love by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended April 25, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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short and sweet, but with a sad ending... I liked the twist you gave this poem, turned something that could have been cliche into something original. Thanks also for reading my poems!
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I really liked this poem. good job on it
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Hey there...wow this is good. I like every line...it flows beautifully. I wish i could write a pretty love poem.
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thank you, im glad you liked it. my poetry comes and goes (as far as creativeness and likeability) and im glad you caught it on a good day, lol
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