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Once upon a time

Lying in bed, a cloud overhead
With your mind just never switched on
Thinking about the world and its doubts
And if your heart will ever move on
Wondering if he's going through the same thing as you
Pondering if he's lying around, misreble too

Once upon a time, living in a fantasy
Once upon a time, life was made for you and me
I gave my heart, played my part for you always
And for a while, it seemed that our love never swayed
Until that day

Love was grand, but I didn't understand
What it could do to you
Until that day, all I thought
Was that our love was really true
But when I saw you and her, my heart was wiped clear
And all I could manage was, thousands of tears


Once upon a time, living in a fantasy
Once upon a time, life was made for you and me
I gave my heart, played my part, heaven knows I've tried
But after that terrible day, all I could do was cry
All night

Lying in bed, a cloud overhead
With your mind just never switched on
Thinking about the world and its doubts
And if your heart will ever move on
Now that it's ending, no one's pretending
That everything is all right
Waiting around for your misreble heart, to see the light

Once upon a time, living in a fantasy
Once upon a time, life was made for you and me
I gave my heart, played my part, in love's great game
But when I waited for my love to be returned, It never came
End of the game

Author notes

A poem/song made by me and my cousin. We were feeling a little depressed so we made a poem/song about it.
"ForeverLastingComa"

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  • Anfractuous
    May 3, 2008

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    It was so sweet, and suddenly it took a turn so depressing. No one wants to see that happen to them. I felt it. Good job, good luck.


  • ForeverLastingComa
    April 21, 2008

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    nice write. you and your cousin..i hate reading poems that i know is a song because then i actually want to hear it *sighs* well good luck in my contes =)


  • Cat10
    April 20, 2008

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    thanks for entering! a nice piece! you (and your cousin) did a great job! good luck