I need inspiration
A reason to keep living
A turning point to regain my life
No longer in control
I long for it all
But I can’t read the future
What happens is what’s meant to be
Or is it just a figment of time
Losing its speed
Author notes
based on book
A contest entry
- tears, fears, and everything inbetween by nobodys-girl.
700 points, ended May 4, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It's a good write, but is it inspiration that really keeps us going? I'm not sure on that one!
Nice use of language, the "figment of time" is a good phrase
This is definitely out a different view on surviving (in my opinion.)
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I want it too, great write.
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This was amazing and well done!... your words spoke volumes and this is my kind of poem
the line breaks were very cleverly placed, limiting need for punctuation The enjabment was just the right speed to let the words sink in... I love the ending, it was a good strong close I had to read it a few times to grasp the full meaning... I think though, that we all feel like that at one stage or another in life, like living in an unreal reality...
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wow! thanks for the extensive comment!! keep commenting!
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very short but full of thought. i loved the first two lines. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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