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Addiction

Missing image


video games
instant messages


freedom reigns


an illusion
~mind trap~

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Prompt: Body Snatcher





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  • Kari gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    I love your take on this. It's very unique! I have never thought about it like that before but oh so true!


  • peridotPixi
    April 21, 2008

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    i so totaly agree that some addictions happen like this and i like the take on the body snatcher, you did leave out the AP addiction that many of us have, good luck in the contest, and keep up the great writing, -Amy


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    ooohhhh, lovely take with this prompt and good luck, it really catches the readers attention, and i like the picture ^_^
    lol
    good luck
    stephanie =)

  • Liquid memories
    April 20, 2008
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    very true

    especially boy seem to be addicted to those games. frustration, anger, never want to stop, rude to parents are part of the fall put from playing those games so much. for sure it is a mind trap, capturing young minds with fantasy games, that some later try to make reality. excellent . success to you.


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    April 19, 2008
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    interesting spin on the promp... you really are a maser of poetry... Great writing..


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    wow....

    nice take.

    Our eyes are in slavery.

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