video games
instant messages
freedom reigns
an illusion
~mind trap~
Author notes
Prompt: Body Snatcher
A contest entry
- Weekend Contest Quickie by Kari.
450 points, ended April 26, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love your take on this. It's very unique! I have never thought about it like that before but oh so true!
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i so totaly agree that some addictions happen like this and i like the take on the body snatcher, you did leave out the AP addiction that many of us have, good luck in the contest, and keep up the great writing, -Amy
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ooohhhh, lovely take with this prompt and good luck, it really catches the readers attention, and i like the picture ^_^
lol
good luck
stephanie =)
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very true
especially boy seem to be addicted to those games. frustration, anger, never want to stop, rude to parents are part of the fall put from playing those games so much. for sure it is a mind trap, capturing young minds with fantasy games, that some later try to make reality. excellent . success to you.
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interesting spin on the promp... you really are a maser of poetry... Great writing..
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wow....
nice take.
Our eyes are in slavery.
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