Fear of something
Is the fear of nothing
For fearing fear is the true fear
Why fear death and so on
I fear nothing
For why shall I fear what is comeing
It is the way of life to fear
But why fear the inevitable
I know that fear is allway a task
But as a task we are meant to get over it
Why fear the darkness of life
Why fear the unknown
The fear of fear
Is what I fear
But those who choose to face their fears,
Shall never taste defeat
For facing fears
Will always allow victory
Because we have over came that fear
So why fear anything at all?
Please tell me what you think
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Your writing is really really amazing. You pull truth and weave it into poetry to make it something magical.
Goodjob. -
Wow this piece definitely makes you think. I like this part the best:
"But those who choose to face their fears,
Shall never taste defeat"
That is soo true. There are a few typos though (you know I always have to notice the grammar lol):
shoul --> should be "shall"
inevidable --> should be "inevitable"
allway --> should be "always"
ment --> should be "meant"
faceing --> should be "facing"
over came --> should be "overcome"
I hope you don't think I'm trying to be a bitch lol, I think your poem is awesome. I'm just trying to help ya out<3 take care
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