Poetic words
quietly play
upon paper
I call ~
frozen music
Author notes
prompt ~ Frozen
A contest entry
- Weekend Contest Quickie by Kari.
450 points, ended April 26, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this! You did a very unique take on the prompt. Well done
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very nice. you penned this so well
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WOW....
Dreamy as poetry, it feels just like music....
Good Luck
Sister Grimm
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This is another beautiful verse. I read your poem and see poems frozen in time. Once published it is there forever and ever. May be frozen, but when read thawed. Do you ever think about that? A hundred years from now, someone may read what your wrote today. Best of luck in the contest.
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The last part was amazing--I'd be incredibly surprised if you didn't win!
Poetry is like music...only "frozen", as you say. It's more subtle and less in-your-ears. Very creative.
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aww wow
so beautiful *hugs*
lovely job and good luck
take acre
stephanie =)
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