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heart eater

    beat
    beat
  a beat poem is asked for
that synchronized sound forming
      it's in sync with your heart
              any heart
              my heart
              your heart
              (watch it
              i eat hearts)
so where's that beat poem
that rapid sound of linked dreams
co-existing for the sake of existing
              i exist too
but you have to be careful y'know
              life, don't fuck around
    don't you go dreaming either
    (beat)
    no, don't go dreaming
    (beat)
    you might just wake up to a world
          slightly unfamiliar
    (beat)
or i could've just eaten your heart
    (beat)

A contest entry

this poem sucks.

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  • Timespell
    April 22, 2008
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    I think I've been robbed...lol