Staring...
with such disdain!
Your heart...
I'll never have again.
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10 words.
Prompt: Frozen
Please tell me what you think
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Wow~~
Now I am not a stalker
(shows notorized document)
I usually read my favs in bulk
Oy~~ Wonderful take on the prompt...
The second line grabs...
Magnificence done in 10words...
Your brevity speaks volumes
Keep that quill dancing~~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wow! The ending was so personal and emotional. Very well done
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In only 10 words - you have captured the prompt quite well. Great little flow going to help boost intensity. You should really try these quickies and such more often!!!
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ahhhhhh, so sad,,,so well written for only 10 words.
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awwwww this is very sad, and yet the background so bring 0.o
lol
wonderfulw rite and good luck
take care
stephanie=)
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Eloquence contained,
frozen on the page.
Heart's story ending
in just ten words!
Bravo!
Aesthete
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