Sorry will never be enough,
the words I cannot say.
To tell you how much
I regret that horrible Mother’s day.
I did something really stupid.
It ruined my life and yours too,
I can never say enough sorrys to you.
That day messed up both our lives,
now you have two ex wives.
I’m very lucky to be back in your life.
After what I did that horrible day,
Left you without a wife.
We were young,
that’s no excuse I know.
leaveing everything I had
for a future of unknown.
I want say I’m sorry,
a million times a day.
When it comes up,
I want to throw that day away.
I don’t want to hear about it,
I know it hurt you so much
I am very lucky to agian have your loving touch.
You are the world to me, my clutch.
I don’t know what I did without you before,
I know I can’t do it anymore.
Author notes
we got devoriced, now we are back together
Option #7: Ohkay, so I want a poem about unfaithfulness. Prompt? The guy is taken, the girl is not, or vise versa. Gimme your best poem about "cheating" or whatever it is you've got.
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Incredible i liked it alot. My favorite part was when you said "It ruined my life and yours too,
I can never say enough sorrys to you.
That day messed up both our lives,
now you have two ex wives.
I’m very lucky to be back in your life.
After what I did that horrible day,
Left you without a wife." good use of great words.Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
Shelly -
Wow, this is incredible. I loved it. Everything about this poem was just so heartfelt and just amazing. Thank you so much for the entry.
"I want say I’m sorry,
a million times a day.
When it comes up,
I want to throw that day away."
Perfect lines. Loved it. Best of luck to you ! Keep writinggg ! ♥
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Its a great poem, Thanks so much for entering my contest. Good luck
♥ Christina -
Such A Beautiful Piece
This Write Is Really Good
And I'm Happy For You Guys
I've Been Through Break Ups And I Got Back Together Again With Her
Thank You For Your Time And Your Lovely Write
And Good Luck
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Well that's sweet, I'm glad that you were able to reconcile
I can't imagine how bad you must have felt though
Must've been some Mother's Day x____x;;
Anyways, nice job, and thanks for enterring
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sweet and tender. Told the story, and the emotions behind it, very well. Congratulations on getting back together.
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wow good it would mean alot to me if i had such a talented writer you to read one off my popems and tell me what you think inn a comment you could read u\m guys are so freakin or love idk one if my new ones just pic one that sounds good to you and then tell me what you think
thank you for sharing with us veiwers
love your veiwer
kathy
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scarred for life16 -
wow. this is a truely great poem!
good luck in the contest.
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