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The Grass That's Green

Far on the hill grasses weave in the wind
bending to the whim of some charlatan
All is quiet in the breath of life
Not a cricket, not a butterfly stirs

Rain will come and knock on the earth
that sips the bounty and stirs
sprouts of grass poke through
Far on the hill grasses weave in the wind

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  • Aerlynne
    May 29, 2008
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    This is beautiful! You can hear the rustle of soft raindrops in dry grass. Quite lulling.


  • suseann
    April 23, 2008

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    Serendipitous,lilting along so..peacefully one visualizes and can hear the grass's sway.A reader can quite easily inhale the airiness in this verse.