Chocolate is a friend of mine
the taste of it is so divine
nestle crunch it is so sweet
milky ways just can't be beat
snickers bars with nuts inside
here it comes, now open wide
when at the store they call my name
it's a craving you can't contain
I could eat chocolate everyday
but boy, my hips would surely pay!
Author notes
Just a spur of the moment poem while laying in bed one night./ username: sunflowers21573
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Comments
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Nothing tastes better than a frozen snickers bar!!! Now i'm having a chocolate attack. Thanks a lot and thanks for posting this.
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Oh how I do love chocolate. I really enjoyed the rhyme and flow of this as well as the cute story told. This is a great poem. Thanks for entering and good luck
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LOL This is a funny poem. I love chocolate too. You forgot 3 Musketeers and Resses Peanut Butter Cups. LOL Anyways, I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thanks for entering and i hope to read more from you soon. This was wonderfully written.
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this is a wonderful poem and a great explianation of choclate it calls my name all the time, i would love to eat it more often, i know my hips would pay for it also, congrats on the HM and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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HAHA i love chocolate too, and this just made me crave it some more. I love the line at the end, so true ^^. Like they say, a minute in the mouth, an hour in the stomach, and a lifetime on your thighs! LOL
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LOL....now I'm craving chocolate - you *do* know it's one of the 5 main food groups (according to me)? lol....what an absolutely decadent poem....thanks for sharing this piece of yumminess!
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lol - cute, cute. Delicious wording and a very nice rhyme. And I love your ending - oh, so true.
thank you for the enjoyable entry
best wishes
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I share your passion sweetie. Have you ever frozen a snickers bar. They go great with coffee!!! Good luck in the contest.
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