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Kidnapped

Flesh tortured,
kept prisoner
to hell's
abductor
of fitness
trainer.

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Prompt - body snatcher

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  • Kari gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    This was scary and deep. Thanks for your entry in this contest. The best of luck!


  • Aeonna
    April 23, 2008

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    ohhh. very powerful words of horror, a sweet take on the prompt...

    Good Luck

    Sister Grimm


  • marlene47 silver member
    April 20, 2008
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    My feelings exactly.
    "Tortured flesh" - I love it.
    Marlene


  • going nowhere
    April 20, 2008
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    haha... well done with few words... you are good at that.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 20, 2008
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    hahaha
    omg this is great
    wonderful write and good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)

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