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In a Frezer

blood is cold and solid
body lifeless, no movement
dead 

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promt: frozen 10 words

A contest entry

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  • Kari gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    That fits the prompt very well.
    Great job


  • natchstucco
    April 20, 2008

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    Either that or you are living in the great Canadian tundra in the winter. oh , snowed yesterday, oops summer too sometimes.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    ooohhhh, awesome write
    lovely job with describing it all =)
    take care and good luck
    stephanie =)


  • Mistress Masquerade
    April 19, 2008

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    wow, ists very powerful. those ten words leave a strong impression. its amazing, best of luck in this contest. you blew me away.