self esteem soars sky-high,
sentimental security seeps a soft sigh,
why, because I, became us, became we,
free in each other to be,
together like one eternally.
A contest entry
- PIF by M a r l u x i a by N e a r.
650 points, ended April 20, 2008, 6 entries
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beautiful
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beautiful...soft imagery that molds together with passion becoming one...a great piece.
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a good piece here, i like the internal rhyme as well as the end line rhyme, a nice flow that makes me smile
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