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image: red wing, blue sky

 
 
to sing a name
with feather
 
silent hands
must gather sound-
a deep note
endless and round,
 
buried with the quiet
song that has no echo.
 
 
one that lacks noise,
with its perfect symmetry

 

red and untethered.
 
 
an ear
drum tunes to rhythm
of heartwood and tide
 
while the other presses to lips
of sky.
 
          [ and waits for a wind, for that whisper
                  that draws the moonlight down. ]
 
 
 
 
 
 
this is how a dead bird
hears music
 
 
in wing
beat
 
 

 
of other.
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • congrats on the hm, Kate...the ending still resonates here reading through this again..beautiful poetry..
  • Excellent imagery...


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 2

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    This poem has your signature all over it, Kate. This is how I came to know your poetry. I think at one stage you steered away from this "style" but I'm delighted to see you've gone back to what works for you, what is so unique about your writing.

    This is simply beautiful and the ending - wow! I can only add my praise to those already here on this page. The occasional rhyme worked well here. I've found this poem to be both stark and soft, heavy and weightless. Just simply gorgeous - a deep song, yes...

    Thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • ardentMarch gold member
    April 25
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    beautiful - such a powerful ending.


  • Rowan gold member
    April 24

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    all I can do is sigh. This is so soft, and so beautiful hon. Perfect entry for this contest; and yeah, the rhythm is perfect.
    I agree with Artfullyme's removal of 'then' though... it does flow better, I think.
    Stunning piece.


  • MuddyKing gold member
    April 22

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    excellence is rare

    rarely do I use the word perfect...but, in this case that is all that jumped out of me
    even the rhymimg was so dead on and I am not a huge fan of it
    this is pure poetry
    at its best

    so glad I was passing through

    peace and hugs
    Muddy


  • Namita silver member
    April 22
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    speechless


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    April 21

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    I love the image, the weightlessness of it contrasting against the magnitude of all that matter...

    still


    "an ear
    drum then tunes to rhythm"

    as clever as that is with the 'drum' on the second line, the 'then' seems to hinder the immediacy of the image for me..

    so I read it

    an eardrum tunes to rhythm
    heartwood and tide
    while another presses to lips







  • Fug-azi
    April 21

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    I still love your writing, though I feel I may have upset you some how .. be nice to know if I have.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 20

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    "buried with the quiet
    song that has no echo"

    Simply, incomparably beautiful. It drenches us with pathos & profundity. Good luck in Nic's contest, my Friend. Wanda


  • Zayra
    April 20

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    This is another brilliant entry from you and it suits the contest theme perfectly!

  • very stark and graphic

    excellent imagery, good luck in the contest


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    April 19

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    This shines in somber notes.

    If it were music, it would be cello or bass. Low and vibrant enough to rattle your heartcage.

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