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Salvation

Missing image
Dragons possessing soul
in pulpit prison,
when angel biker
killed cross beast
with love's sword.

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15 words

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    April 19, 2008

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    Lots of meaning in that first phrase!
    A St. George/dragon story? I like the St. Margaret one as well... she was her own salvation.
    Marlene

  • Nighttime angel
    April 19, 2008
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    I like this poem, nice take on the prompt

    good luck

    kat


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    nicely written poet

    Good luck

    Simon


  • Kari gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Short, deep, and very good. Well done and the best of luck!


  • Nevel
    April 19, 2008

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    Powerful words full imagery! In only 15 words......Good luck in the contest

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