she sat in her predicament,
the lullaby of grievance
in the back of her mind,
and she knows
her fate
Author notes
THE PICTURE ITHE PICTURE IS THE PROMPT
Picture found on Gothic Picture Gallery
A contest entry
- 10/20 PIF Quickie by Nighttime angel.
950 points, ended April 19, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It does make you sorry for the accused when the tears flow.
Fine observation and telling of it.
Marlene -
Nice take on the prompt
Simon -
Love it!!!
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I like your poem. I like your take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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