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Poor Whore

I once knew a lady lewd
Who griped about being screwed
How I used to adore
This silly old whore
Until truth was finally viewed

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  • Celticmoon
    May 18, 2008
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    Yes I admit I chuckled with this limerick however the vocabulary chosen is not my forte but that is just a personal notation and I mean no harm in saying such. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you.

    Blessings
    Bel


  • B Chandler
    May 15, 2008
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    Ummm okay then