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Waiting

You can't see it
It's impossible to hear
Just be very careful cause
It's known to cause a tear

You feel it in your soul
And you feel it in your heart
We may feel broken, torn, destroyed
If ever we fall part

It should not be jealous
Only patient and kind
Yet for some reason it looms
Over my body and mind

I don't love many things
Only few things are true
There are only certain people
And some precious things too

Some people don't believe
Some will never be sure
But without love I've seen
No one could endure.

But in my case it has disappeared
And now Im left feeling cold and wierd
As i wait for it to return
As my heart turns cold yet still burns

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  • Angelflower
    May 28, 2008

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    this was a wonderful write!!!
    there was such depth.. The imagery
    was just so vivid and the emotions in your words!
    they were just so strong.. It was a soft read but strong... Thank you very much for sharing this with us.. Best of luck.

    Angel