Innocence
I am it
Why do I hurt
I fear my very life
But why do you hate me so?
In your own rightious mind
You condemn me
Into your own sacrifice
You find it so sweet
In my own it is so bitter
You put me turn burn internally
I'm crieing
And your going to drown in them
Crash around you feeble body
I created this fear of you
Me, it is all in my head
This is my Sweet Sacrifice
And now your the Bitter one
Because on this Broken day
You now know
I was your Sweet Sacrifice
The hate you have for me,
The fear I created from you,
They are your now coming end
And I can only smile
While your passing
Sweet Sacrifice
Bitter Sacrifice
Your blown away
Your the sand in the hour glass...
Haha...
Author notes
sweet sacrifice evanescence
A contest entry
- Sweet Sacrifice ( song Inspired) by Firequeen.
700 points, ended April 29, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The sixth--~*~Options~*~ by Dark Magician.
525 points, ended June 10, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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...... i liked your word choice in this but it has no real rhyme scheme or flow......I'm not sure what to say about it. i don't exactly like it but i cant say i don't like it either.
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wow kels this was uhm wow lolz love it
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