Deeply, the barbed wire barrier pierces me
The past's screaming wounds must be revived
The naked skin disarming the thorned shields
My core is unprotected again, weak, defenseless
Does fate want warmth to reach me in your hands?
Author notes
"Think about how your love life is going. The people you have always felt attracted to have never liked you back. Your relationships always ended within a month (because of the person cheating on you or harrassing you). Finally... you've found the right one who loves you back, entirely. You've found your soulmate" <- Used as a prompt.
For other contest: Black. Just black.
A contest entry
- PIF by M a r l u x i a by N e a r.
650 points, ended April 20, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - how far?? by onapedestalIstand.
300 points, ended May 6, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was good but it was too short for me..sorry.thanks though...sarah
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I can feel your words. Then sad when I saw that you fairly young. The emotions dont stop, but you can change the way you allow yourself to react.
Nice write -
Yes I can see why this one its gold. Congrats on your winning!!!
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At first I was confused about the poem and its meaning, then I read your notes and evrything became clear. Not gonna lie, I love it! It is very meaningful and very profound. I have felt this exact way before and Im always excited to read a poem I can relate to! Excellent job. Thank you so much for it!!!
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